Monday, October 27, 2008

what ever!!!

i think it would be better for me to do chores like pack water get ice. also if i am felling good i would want to start doing dishes. but i would not be able to do the cups. because the cups are to small for my hands. so my brother comes in handy for the cups. and i would be doing the bowls and some of the bigger cups is the main things i could wash. and my brother could do the cups an utensils. and i think i would be able to do laundry but i am still thinking of doing these things around the house... but i have many things to do outside and i also have lots of homework witch i do not do most of the time at home. but some days when i feel like working on them i do them. what are some other things i could do around the house... what are some suggestions you guys got for me to do around the house. some days i feel like i am doing nothing around the house so i am thinking of doing something. some of the things i like to do around the house is sometimes is picking things of the floor... most of the time i do that but not all the time.

Writing Process

The writing process has five steps. Those steps are prewriting, drafting, revising, editing and, last but not least, is publishing.
In the prewriting step you have to jot down ideas you want to write about. Then you choose one of the ideas write more in depth. Prewriting helps us get started if we are stuck. We come up with a ton of ideas to choose from – maybe we think of something to write about in this step that we wouldn’t have thought of. It helps us to narrow our ideas down and to choose a subject and focus. This helps to organize our writing so it isn’t all over the place and is more organized.
Then, after prewriting, we head to drafting. In the drafting step you write your ideas down on paper. When you are drafting we look at our writing piece over and over again. Through multiple viewings we see what we need to improve on and how the piece has changed. Viewing these changes helps us to see what we improved on and what else we need to change.
The next step after you have finished drafting. You get to revising your pies in the writing process is the best part. You are looking at organization of your writing and, the strengths or weaknesses of your pies.
Then you get to the editing part, and you think about the spelling, grammar and mechanics. When you are editing it is important because
Since we are writing and someone real is going to read it we want to make sure our writing is good quality writing so we don’t have mistakes or embarrass our selves. The audience also might give you ideas for improvement.

Friday, October 10, 2008




Weekend, I think i want to go visit my sister this weekend. I want to see her before we cant travel. Plus i was thinking of going to Dental this morning but i changed my mind because I could go Monday.

Thursday, October 9, 2008



How dose this picture look when i was younger. And tell me who i look like.



This picture of me now looks familiar. What do you see in this one.